ken_ichijouji | (Reply)

This whole thing was shiny! Sorry I am late to the party but I was out of town without internet and seriously stayed up til 230 in the morning to read 5 through this....

I almost want to say poor Marla from the last part, but then I remember what she did and that goes away.

I adore your Jim and Bones, and might actually have to go back and read the previous stories in this verse, in order to better understand this masterpiece...

Also over 62k in two weeks? I'm amazed and astounded and no, it doesn't show, at least not to me.

So yes, this comment is all flaily and long but I have two chapters and an epilogue's worth of flailing to do, so here it goes:

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