Fic: To the End (La Comédie) 4a/7

Title: To the End (La Comédie)
Series: Star Trek XI (as if I write for anything else these days): water park 'verse
Rating: PG-13/R for some violence, swearing, and fade-to-black sexy stuff
Summary: You are cordially invited to the Starfleet social function of the year. That is, assuming these terrorists and the Enterprise Crew's own issues don't get in the way.
Disclaimer: I own nothing that has to do with the characters featured in Star Trek or the Star Trek movie from 2009. No harm was meant, so put the lawyers away, man.

Chapter Notes:I realized that somehow I had never written a scene with the classic trio being all...classic trio-ey with each other. Lots of Jim and Bones interaction, some Spock and Bones interaction, and a fair amount of Jim and Spock interaction. Nothing with the three of them together. Consider this rectified!

Writing a practically ten year old is fucking hard, by the way. It was so much easier to write Jo when she was all eight and smuggled on board a ship during her dad’s birthday. My bad for letting her grow up, I guess. JOANNA MCCOY WHY ARE YOU NOT FROZEN IN CARBONITE YOU GET DOWN HERE THIS INSTANT DON’T FORGET TO CLEAN YOUR ROOM. Also Jocelyn will be played by Kelly Rutherford aka Lily Rhodes-van der Woodsen-Bass-Humphrey. She’s only slightly older than Karl Urban so I figure it’s believable they were married and had a kid together. Plus she’s just kind of generally amazing and was born in Kentucky! There is a method to my fantasy casting.

Speaking of fantasy casting, Dianna Agron is my Janice Rand. She has enough hair for the elaborate hairstyles, she’s spunky and able to have a bit of an edge, and she’d totally pull off being a hyper-competent Girl Friday. I think it’s a pretty good match and it goes with my whole “Sulu likes leggy blondes” theory. And yes, before anyone asks, sometimes I do read Kirk/Sulu. Mostly when it’s written by maypirate!

Atmosphere is actually a real place in San Francisco, it has yelp reviews and everything. Although currently it is simply a dance club, I figure someone buys it or whatever in the next 200 years and there we go, Starfleet friendly strip club with strippers from every race ever, even Tellarite if you’re into that kind of thing. Related: am I the only person disturbed by the fact that yelp reviews strip clubs? Because they do, if you’re curious. Right, moving on.

Once again, this chapter has been split into two parts due to length. The link for part two is at the bottom of this section.

( Jim was practically giddy the next morning as he watched the Enterprise begin to slide into space dock above Earth’s atmosphere. )

Chapter 3b | Chapter 4B

Fic: To the End (La Comédie) 4b/7

This is part two of Chapter Four. Part one can be found here.

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Chapter 3A | Chapter 5A

Fic: To the End (La Comédie) 4b/7

This is part two of Chapter Four. Part one can be found here.

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Chapter 3A | Chapter 5A

Fic: To the End (La Comédie) 4a/7

Title: To the End (La Comédie)
Series: Star Trek XI (as if I write for anything else these days): water park 'verse
Rating: PG-13/R for some violence, swearing, and fade-to-black sexy stuff
Summary: You are cordially invited to the Starfleet social function of the year. That is, assuming these terrorists and the Enterprise Crew's own issues don't get in the way.
Disclaimer: I own nothing that has to do with the characters featured in Star Trek or the Star Trek movie from 2009. No harm was meant, so put the lawyers away, man.

Chapter Notes:I realized that somehow I had never written a scene with the classic trio being all...classic trio-ey with each other. Lots of Jim and Bones interaction, some Spock and Bones interaction, and a fair amount of Jim and Spock interaction. Nothing with the three of them together. Consider this rectified!

Writing a practically ten year old is fucking hard, by the way. It was so much easier to write Jo when she was all eight and smuggled on board a ship during her dad’s birthday. My bad for letting her grow up, I guess. JOANNA MCCOY WHY ARE YOU NOT FROZEN IN CARBONITE YOU GET DOWN HERE THIS INSTANT DON’T FORGET TO CLEAN YOUR ROOM. Also Jocelyn will be played by Kelly Rutherford aka Lily Rhodes-van der Woodsen-Bass-Humphrey. She’s only slightly older than Karl Urban so I figure it’s believable they were married and had a kid together. Plus she’s just kind of generally amazing and was born in Kentucky! There is a method to my fantasy casting.

Speaking of fantasy casting, Dianna Agron is my Janice Rand. She has enough hair for the elaborate hairstyles, she’s spunky and able to have a bit of an edge, and she’d totally pull off being a hyper-competent Girl Friday. I think it’s a pretty good match and it goes with my whole “Sulu likes leggy blondes” theory. And yes, before anyone asks, sometimes I do read Kirk/Sulu. Mostly when it’s written by maypirate!

Atmosphere is actually a real place in San Francisco, it has yelp reviews and everything. Although currently it is simply a dance club, I figure someone buys it or whatever in the next 200 years and there we go, Starfleet friendly strip club with strippers from every race ever, even Tellarite if you’re into that kind of thing. Related: am I the only person disturbed by the fact that yelp reviews strip clubs? Because they do, if you’re curious. Right, moving on.

Once again, this chapter has been split into two parts due to length. The link for part two is at the bottom of this section.

( Jim was practically giddy the next morning as he watched the Enterprise begin to slide into space dock above Earth’s atmosphere. )

Chapter 3b | Chapter 4B